Beautifully composed, MentalDessert. But I’m in a quandary as to who is doing the waiting. Are you waiting for your partner to take a breath or are they waiting for you to remove your hands from around their neck? Just kidding (getting little punchy) … Your poem was wonderful, and even a bit erotic. Now, I must try to get back to work! :-D

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